Question

can someone please proof read my paragraph?
The Mongolian Empires Down Fall
The Mongolian empire was the largest empire to exist in the world. Genghis Khan led the Mongolian Empire killing and taking over many parts of Asia. They managed to get over the great wall and take Chinese land. Their victories where short lived when China managed to defeat them in 1368 B.C.; shortly after the Ming dynasty came to power.

Answer 1

Again, watch your capitalization. The Great Wall is a proper noun. You once refer to the Mongolian empire and again to the Mongolian Empire. Which do you think is right? And you use a semi-colon when a comma is called for.

Answer 2

thank you so much reed