Can someone check my work?

English:
My cousin came over to play.
We were running around the living room.
My brother and cousin crashed into each other.
And my brother cut the corner of his eye open.

Spanish:
My primo vino a jugar,
Nosotros estábamos corriendo alrededor de la sala.
Mi hermano y mi primo se chocaron uno contra el otro.
Y mi hermano se cortó abriendo la comisura del ojo.

Just need to make sure, I got my corrections correct.

Muchas Gracias!

1 answer

It looks good.

Sra