Can someone check my work?

English:
My cousin came over to play.
We were running around the living room.
My brother and cousin crashed into each other.
And my brother cut the corner of his eye open.

Spanish:
Mi primo vino a casa jugar.
Fuimos correr alrededer de la sala.
Mi hermano y mi primo chocaron contra el uno al otro.
Y mi hermano cortó la comisura de los párpados (open)

Just need to check if my Spanish is correct.

Muchas Gracias!

2 answers

the first two sentences are wrong :
mi primo vino a mi casa para jugar.
nostoros estamos corriendo alrededor de la sala.
or vino a jugar
Nosotros estábamos corriendo alrededor de la sala
Mi h ermano y mi primo se chocaron uno contra el otro
Y mi hermano se cortó abriendo.....del ojo (not párpados).

Sra
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