Can anyone help me with this essay question? Mr. Peters learns to be satisfied with his life and decides not to use his third and final wish. Did Mr. Peters make the right decision to help him resolve his internal conflict? Compose an argument that is at least one paragraph in length. Support your claims with at least two valid and relevant pieces of evidence from the text, including direct quotes and page numbers.
I need 8 sentences, I have already written 3 sentences but that isn't going to be enough if I add the two pieces of evidence from the story. the two sentences I have written down say "Mr. Peters’ internal conflict was whether or not to turn Lieta back into a swan, so she can be happy with her sister. He did turn Lieta back into a swan and she was happy to be with her sister. So Mr. Peters did make the right decision, making that decision solved his internal conflict." Can anyone help please?
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The last sentence that you came up with should be the very last of the paragraph. Don't use the comma in the first sentence just say, "Mr.Peters internal conflict was whether or not to turn Lieta back into a swan so she can be happy with her sister." And also put "He did turn Lieta back into a swan and she was happy to be with her sister" before the last sentence, it will make it better. If he did think about the decision, you should put that in there. Maybe this will give you some ideas, if not say so and i'll help. Hopefully this helped some.
I am still stuck on 3 sentences... I honestly can't think of anything to put for the last few sentences, and this will be day two of being stuck on this one question. Is there any other information from the story that I can include in the paragraph that answers the question?
You should include that he thought about Lieta and not himself for the third wish. He wasn't selfish for the third wish. If that gives you some ideas, put them down, if you need more i'll think of some and i'll let you know.👌
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