Boom, Boom- the music goes
Boom, Boom- Feel the beat from head to toes
Boom, Boom- my heart is thumping
Boom, Boom- It's quite frightening
Boom, Boom- Feel the world's weight on me
Boom, Boom- Millions of eyes are staring at me
Boom, Boom-I'm scared like a cat
Boom, Boom- Wish I could fly away like a bat
Boom, Boom- I'm a terrified bunny
Boom, Boom- but don't think it's funny
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How can I add personification and alliteration?
2 answers
I forgot to say that this is about getting in front of a lot of people and dancing. (I'll say this later on in the poem)
Some things are better left alone a day or two, then reread and edited. Yours is in that category.