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Alzheimer's
Something i became more aware of was Alzheimr's Disease.This disease gradually destorys a person's memory and ability to learn and carry behavior . There aren't any cures for the Alzherimer diease and researchers can't predivt how fast somewill will progress theoug the differnt stages of the diease. If founnded early, diagnosis and treatment can slow the progession of Alzheimer's symptoms.
This devastating disease has impacted my family. The things we used to do is limited .Everyone has made changes in their virtual routine to care for my grandfather since he was diagnosedwith Alzheimer's last year. He has sufferd a huge amount of changes with this illness. This fatal disease has a countlesseffect on you very forgetful. It kills your brain cells making them fragile and confused. Most people aren't familiar with the changes of Alheimer's , how it shrinks the causes seizures. That makes his brain shirink from days and hours to minutes, then seconds and then to nothing.My granddad was a man filled with energy. He spents thirty-two years working and taking great care of his family. He was the sole provider for his children and wife. After he retired from work his health failed and that's when we noticed the change in his behavior. But now, his days or spent quietly in his room, wordless staring at one thing countless. Pa Pa was a man of great dignity and honor. He went above and beyond his means to help any one. Alzheimer's has impacted him and usin ways that can't be recorded or documented by anyone. He would participate in any outdoor sctivity that someone had engaged in. He didn't belive that women were suppose to do outdoor work. The worst part of this is that older families member are conderned that this diease maybe inherited and could be passed on to their children; this cause stree on the family. Not, in a million years, i thought that our family would have to deal with anything like this. We never experienced the lost of anyone in our immediate family even though he is still with us.The changes that we edurewith him are very unbearable .Alzheimer's Disease not only affects a personsmind but one's appetite, too. Then you dtart to wonder how does one survives with no nutriton to nouries the body. It eats away a person's ability to function properly.The simple things we take for granted like getting dress, combing our hair, walking around and actually knowing where we are going at times is like winning the lottery ticket for some with Alzheomer's . When i look at my grandfather and see what he's dealing with, i cry with emotional tears inside, because i don't like to be the one who brings the family down.
What my grandfather went though this summer has impacted me. I became awarte of sickness no matter what it maybe.A headache,or the chills could all be related to something serious, you just don't know . We all should have regular check-ups. So we will know what's happening to our bodies
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Alzheimer's
Something i became more aware of was Alzheimr's Disease.This disease gradually destorys a person's memory and ability to learn and carry behavior . There aren't any cures for the Alzherimer diease, and researchers can't predivt how fast some will will progress
Since I've found three or four errors in each sentence, I'm turning this back to you. Please read it carefully, and repost your corrected copy.
In the next 10 words, 4 are misspelled.
theoug the differnt stages of the diease. If founnded early, diagnosis and treatment can slow the progession of Alzheimer's symptoms.
This devastating disease has impacted my family. The things we used to do is limited .Everyone has made changes in their virtual routine to care for my grandfather since he was diagnosedwith Alzheimer's last year. He has sufferd a huge amount of changes with this illness. This fatal disease has a countlesseffect on you very forgetful. It kills your brain cells making them fragile and confused. Most people aren't familiar with the changes of Alheimer's , how it shrinks the causes seizures. That makes his brain shirink from days and hours to minutes, then seconds and then to nothing.My granddad was a man filled with energy. He spents thirty-two years working and taking great care of his family. He was the sole provider for his children and wife. After he retired from work his health failed and that's when we noticed the change in his behavior. But now, his days or spent quietly in his room, wordless staring at one thing countless. Pa Pa was a man of great dignity and honor. He went above and beyond his means to help any one. Alzheimer's has impacted him and usin ways that can't be recorded or documented by anyone. He would participate in any outdoor sctivity that someone had engaged in. He didn't belive that women were suppose to do outdoor work. The worst part of this is that older families member are conderned that this diease maybe inherited and could be passed on to their children; this cause stree on the family. Not, in a million years, i thought that our family would have to deal with anything like this. We never experienced the lost of anyone in our immediate family even though he is still with us.The changes that we edurewith him are very unbearable .Alzheimer's Disease not only affects a personsmind but one's appetite, too. Then you dtart to wonder how does one survives with no nutriton to nouries the body. It eats away a person's ability to function properly.The simple things we take for granted like getting dress, combing our hair, walking around and actually knowing where we are going at times is like winning the lottery ticket for some with Alzheomer's . When i look at my grandfather and see what he's dealing with, i cry with emotional tears inside, because i don't like to be the one who brings the family down.
What my grandfather went though this summer has impacted me. I became awarte of sickness no matter what it maybe.A headache,or the chills could all be related to something serious, you just don't know . We all should have regular check-ups. So we will know what's happening to our bodies
Alzheimer's
Something i became more aware of was Alzheimr's Disease.This disease gradually destorys a person's memory and ability to learn and carry behavior . There aren't any cures for the Alzherimer diease, and researchers can't predivt how fast some will will progress
Since I've found three or four errors in each sentence, I'm turning this back to you. Please read it carefully, and repost your corrected copy.
In the next 10 words, 4 are misspelled.
theoug the differnt stages of the diease. If founnded early, diagnosis and treatment can slow the progession of Alzheimer's symptoms.
This devastating disease has impacted my family. The things we used to do is limited .Everyone has made changes in their virtual routine to care for my grandfather since he was diagnosedwith Alzheimer's last year. He has sufferd a huge amount of changes with this illness. This fatal disease has a countlesseffect on you very forgetful. It kills your brain cells making them fragile and confused. Most people aren't familiar with the changes of Alheimer's , how it shrinks the causes seizures. That makes his brain shirink from days and hours to minutes, then seconds and then to nothing.My granddad was a man filled with energy. He spents thirty-two years working and taking great care of his family. He was the sole provider for his children and wife. After he retired from work his health failed and that's when we noticed the change in his behavior. But now, his days or spent quietly in his room, wordless staring at one thing countless. Pa Pa was a man of great dignity and honor. He went above and beyond his means to help any one. Alzheimer's has impacted him and usin ways that can't be recorded or documented by anyone. He would participate in any outdoor sctivity that someone had engaged in. He didn't belive that women were suppose to do outdoor work. The worst part of this is that older families member are conderned that this diease maybe inherited and could be passed on to their children; this cause stree on the family. Not, in a million years, i thought that our family would have to deal with anything like this. We never experienced the lost of anyone in our immediate family even though he is still with us.The changes that we edurewith him are very unbearable .Alzheimer's Disease not only affects a personsmind but one's appetite, too. Then you dtart to wonder how does one survives with no nutriton to nouries the body. It eats away a person's ability to function properly.The simple things we take for granted like getting dress, combing our hair, walking around and actually knowing where we are going at times is like winning the lottery ticket for some with Alzheomer's . When i look at my grandfather and see what he's dealing with, i cry with emotional tears inside, because i don't like to be the one who brings the family down.
What my grandfather went though this summer has impacted me. I became awarte of sickness no matter what it maybe.A headache,or the chills could all be related to something serious, you just don't know . We all should have regular check-ups. So we will know what's happening to our bodies