(1) In “The Landlady,” Roald Dahl masterfully builds suspense for readers.
(2) The seventeen-year-old finds a place to stay at a Bed and Breakfast owned by a peculiar proprietor. (3) Dahl starts building suspense immediately when Billy meets her. (4) The author initially gives readers subtle clues that something is amiss by the way the woman immediately answers the door and the unusually cheap rate she charges.
(5) Dahl continues to build suspense with subtle clues, such as the time Billy thinks he recognizes the name of one of the former guests after reading the guestbook: “That’s funny, they thought suddenly.” (6) Christopher Mulholland. (6) It rings a bell. (7) Now where on earth had he heard that unusual name before?”
(8) Eventually, Dahl’s subtle clues become flashing warning signs before Billy begins to understand he is in a troublesome situation. (9) Billy wonders aloud “Wait just a minute. Mulholland . . . Christopher Mulholland . . . wasn’t that the name of the Eton schoolboy who was on a walking-tour through the West Country, and then all of a sudden . . .” (10) The innkeeper’s creepy stuffed dog, strange-smelling tea and claim that she hasn’t had a guest in three years, make Billy even more suspicious.
(11) Dahl skillfully will maintain the suspense through the end of the story as he left readers wondering about the ultimate fate of Billy Weaver.
Multiple Choice Question
Which is the best version of the underlined portion of sentence 8 (reproduced below)?
Eventually, Dahl’s subtle clues become flashing warning signs before Billy begins to understand he is in a troublesome situation.
A.
NO CHANGE
B.
because Billy begins to understand
C.
unless Billy begins to understand
D.
as Billy begins to understand
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The best version of the underlined portion of sentence 8 is:
D. as Billy begins to understand
This option maintains the original meaning while improving the clarity of the sentence. "As" indicates that the flashing warning signs occur simultaneously with Billy's growing awareness of his troublesome situation.
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