"clutter scattered" = redundant, wordy
"that idea" = what idea???
"One roommate might see nothing wrong with placing dirty dishes in the sink and leaving those there all night" -- How can you say this concept in fewer words.
Need help revising this paragraph
Some folks don’t mind lots of clutter scattered around the house. Others can’t stand that idea. Even doing dishes can be a point of contention. One roommate might see nothing wrong with placing dirty dishes in the sink and leaving those there all night
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