Question

A thief must have broken into the house. The house is broken. There is a piece of cloth of a blue shirt on the table. On the floor, there are many footprints. Encyclopedia is looking for evidences with a magnifier. Who do you think is the thief among the three suspects? I think the thief is Emily because she was carrying many folds in hands last night. I also saw a bandage on her hand. I think the thief is Tom because he was carrying a bundle of keys. I think the thief is Robin because he was running away with a bag on his shoulder. I also found his footprints on the floor, which were similar to those of the thief.

(Would you check the passage and correct errors, please? Thank you.)

Answer 1

A thief must have broken into the house. The front door is broken, and there is a piece of cloth from a blue shirt on the table. On the floor, there are many footprints. <u>Encyclopedia is looking for evidences with a magnifier.</u> Who do you think is the thief among the three suspects? I think the thief could be Emily because she was carrying many <u>folds in hands</u> last night. I also saw a bandage on her hand. I think the thief could be Tom because he was carrying a bunch of keys. I think the thief could be Robin because he was running away with a bag thrown over his shoulder. I also found his footprints on the floor, which were similar to those of the thief.

<b>I've made corrections above, so compare your post with mine very carefully. Also, the underlined words don't make sense or seem to fit in.</b>