How would I revise this sentence to eliminate unnecessary shifts in tense, mood, voice, or person?
The freezing weather is threatening crops such as citrus fruits which were sensitive to cold.
The freezing weather threatened the crops, which were sensitive to cold.
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That's good. Your correction fixes the shift in tense so it's all in the past tense now.
Thank you for over looking my work and giving me confidence. English is not an easy subject for me.
the freezing weather os threatening crops such as citrus fruits, which were sensitve to cold
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