Asked by Alex

I am doing an intro paragraph of being on a pedal boat at a bay. My writing teacher said we had to make our stories interesting and make people want to read it and be fascinated with it. So, I started with:

"Ahhh!!! We're going to sink," said Elana.

For my second line, what should I put?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Why does Elana think they are going to sink?

Answered by Alex
There a strong winds which are rocking the boat and there are some water leaking in on both sides.
Answered by Ms. Sue
"Water is pouring into the boat!"

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