Asked by cynthia
Is this memo correct (semi-colon) in right sentence and time/date correct? Thanks! There were no punctuations at all when we were given this.
We are going to make a few changes in the health plan we now offer; The Economy Plan and the Standard Plan—both of these will be affected. Please note that the deductibles, out-of-pocket pocket maximum, and lifetime maximum benefit have gone up slightly.
Please refer to the 20 pages of information that were distributed yesterday regarding these changes. We will have a meeting at 2:00 p.m. next Thursday to discuss these changes.
We are going to make a few changes in the health plan we now offer; The Economy Plan and the Standard Plan—both of these will be affected. Please note that the deductibles, out-of-pocket pocket maximum, and lifetime maximum benefit have gone up slightly.
Please refer to the 20 pages of information that were distributed yesterday regarding these changes. We will have a meeting at 2:00 p.m. next Thursday to discuss these changes.
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Answered by
Writeacher
The first sentence needs changes --
... in the health plans we now offer; both The Economy Plan and the Standard Plan will be affected.
Everything else is OK.
... in the health plans we now offer; both The Economy Plan and the Standard Plan will be affected.
Everything else is OK.
Answered by
Writeacher
Well ... delete the repetition of "pocket" in that second sentence!!
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