this is my essay so far
The story of Anne Frank and The Holocaust should not be taught in middle school. It should be saved for high school when students are more mature. The students would be able to handle it better when they are older. When I was in sixth grade, we watched some movies about the Holocaust and there was a Jewish student in my class. While the class was watching the movie he was crying due to how badly the Jews were treated. I think students under age of sixteen won’t be able to handle this horrifying subject. Some will think it’s a joke even though it’s not. The appropriate age to learn about the Holocaust is sixteen.
The reason why it should be taught in high school is because students will understand how to treat others and teaches them about prejudice. Students will also learn to be grateful what they have. Staying in one room for two years with NOTHING to do is crazy. The middle schoolers won't understand
The material is a not appropriate. You're learning about race, religion, and genocide.
I'm having a hard time breaking down the paragraphs and adding more details.
I have to write THREE SUPORTING reasons why the holocaust SHOULD NOT be taught in middle school. I'm trying not to write the first reason in my intro but I have NOTHING else to write in my intro.
plz help! I'm really going to have a panic attack (NOT lying)