Please could you help me with this paragraph. How is my English grammar and usage? Do I need to make any corrections?

Question

"I have been checking for the status of positions I applied at Willmut Gas, but no actions have been taken yet. Somehow, the cashier position has been taken off the posting list (but I applied for it)."

Answer 1

"I have been checking the status of the positions I applied for at Willmut Gas, but no actions have been taken yet. Somehow, the cashier position has been taken off the posting list (after I applied for it)."

Answer 2

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