Question

The last thing on my final is a paragraph I had to write, Using correct spelling and correct grammar, write a paragraph of five related sentences that discuss your experience in the English Grammar course. Using all four sentence types.

Will you proof read for me?

Alas, Lord, I have conquered this English Grammar course! English Grammar has been a very challenging course for me. How did I keep all the grammar rules in my head? You must study and keep reviewing to succeed. Although a challenging course, I thank Jesus, I have really learned a lot that I will be able to use in my writings.

Answer 1

"Alas" -- you're sorry about this?

I see these types of sentences:
exclamatory - 1
indicative (statement) - 3
interrogative (question) - 1

or

simple - 4
compound - 0
complex - 0
compound-complex - 0

run-on/comma splice - 1

Answer 2

Thank You so much for pointing the Alas out to me. That would have been embarrassing. The professor has graded none of our papers for about 4 weeks, but at that time I had a 98 average. So I see I need to work a declarative sentence in there.
Hey to be 63 out of school since the 70's I think I am doing pretty good.

Thank You again. I will rewrite this

Answer 3

I agree!!

How about this?

<i>Behold, Lord, I have conquered this English Grammar course! English Grammar has been a very challenging course for me. How did I keep all the grammar rules in my head? I had to study and keep reviewing to succeed. Although it has been a challenging course, I have really learned a lot that I will be able to use in my writings.</i>

Answer 4

Behold, Lord, I have conquered this English Grammar course! (exclamatory -- simple)

English Grammar has been a very challenging course for me. (indicative, statement, declarative -- simple)

How did I keep all the grammar rules in my head? (interrogatory -- simple)

I had to study and keep reviewing to succeed. (indicative, statement, declarative -- simple)

Although it has been a challenging course, I have really learned a lot that I will be able to use in my writings.
(indicative, statement, declarative -- complex)

Answer 5

one more ? Can I cange I had to study and keep reviewing to succeed. --- You must study and keep reviewing to succeed.
To use as an imperative sentence. I need all 4

Answer 6

http://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary/imperative_sentence.htm