Hi beautiful people!

Quick question if you are writing a congratulatory letter should you say
- I would like to take the time to congratulate you on your extraordinary commitment to XXX charity.
OR
- I would like to tak ethe time to congratulate you for your extraordinary commitment to XXX charity.

Thanks for your help

1 answer

1. Get rid of the first 8 words. They're completely unnecessary, and they make the sentence wordy.

2. Start with "Congratulations for ... "
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