Question
Does this sentence sound good for a beginning of a job proposal.
“To begin with, I know that the designer for this freelance job would need to consider a dimensional look.
“To begin with, I know that the designer for this freelance job would need to consider a dimensional look.
Answers
Ms. Sue
It's too weak.
Try to start with the most important words. Perhaps -- "A dimensional look . . ."
Try to start with the most important words. Perhaps -- "A dimensional look . . ."