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I researched the genocide in Rwanda for my paper. In Rwanda, there are two major groups: The Hutu and the Tutsi. Even though the Hutu mad up 90% of the population in Rwanda, the Tutsi were basically the aristocrats of the country. After Rwanda gained independence from Belgium, the Hutu took control and overpowered the Tutsi. The Hutu also oppressed the Tutsis, causing them to flee to different countries to form their own rebel armies. One of the major rebel armies came back into Rwanda and forced the current president to allow the Hutu and the Tutsi share power. There were several Hutu who were truly and violently against sharing any power whatsoever with the Tutsi. Some of these Hutu wanted the extermination of all Tutsi.
On April 6th, 1994, the genocide started. 800,000 people were killed in the next one hundred days. The Hutu began beating the Tutsi to death. They used Machetes, grenades, and guns.
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