Question

I am writing a research paper on the women's rights movement. I have to discuss whether it was a success or failure and support my answer with detail. I believe that in some ways it was a success and failure because even though women throughout the years has gain some respect in our society in some ways we are still fighting for equality.

I think I just wrote my thesis up there but any ideas on how to make it sound a bit better and any suggestions on the introduction?

Answer 1

You need to take a stand -- and not say that the women's movement was both a success and failure. You need to do enough research and think about the question enough to make a decision -- success or failure?