Asked by Blaze

I need this paragraph proofread
To test Erdman’s statement, Deja Guinn, a Christian and senior at WMU decided to join the SSA group. Guinn says unlike most of the group members, who are atheist agnostic, she is a Christian and believes in how Jesus Christ would see the world. However, Guinn says she decided to join to group as an underdog to share her point of views on topics from a religious standpoint, and also to enhance her knowledge of an atheist’s perspective on things.

what other word could I use besides underdog? and how could I better that sentence? also I need help revising the last sentence.
If you see any other errors let me know..
Thanks
Answered by Ms. Sue
who are atheist OR agnostic

Instead of "underdog," you could say . . .she decided to join this group as a minority member . . .
Answered by Blaze
However, Guinn says she decided to join to group as an underdog to share her point of views on topics from a religious standpoint, and also to enhance her knowledge of an atheist’s perspective on things

do you believe this sentence is fine Ms.Sue?
Answered by Ms. Sue
I still like minority member better than underdog. This club is not a contest.


Answered by Blaze
oops I'm sorry i did change it to minority member
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