Asked by Kim
does this sound write and look grammatically correct? Please and thank you
Odysseus the Curious took us inside a cave to eat. After we ate some cheeses the ugly Cyclops came along with his flock of sheep and rams. He put a gigantic boulder to block the exit of the cave. The whole crew was scared because we were stuck with a man-eating “thing.”
Odysseus the Curious took us inside a cave to eat. After we ate some cheeses the ugly Cyclops came along with his flock of sheep and rams. He put a gigantic boulder to block the exit of the cave. The whole crew was scared because we were stuck with a man-eating “thing.”
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Answered by
Writeacher
"cheese" not "cheeses"!
comma after "cheese"
Use "moved" rather than "put"
Everything else sounds fine.
comma after "cheese"
Use "moved" rather than "put"
Everything else sounds fine.
Answered by
Kim
thanks
Answered by
Writeacher
You're welcome.
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