Question

Need to know how to correct this run on sentences.
In some parts of Canada's Northwest Territory the only way to transport supplies is over frozen lakes being a ice road tucker is one of the most dangerous jobs in the worl.d.

Answer 1

Where would you end the first sentence?

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Answer 2

In some parts of Canada's Northwest Territory, the only way to transport supplies is over frozen lakes ,which, for ice road truckers, is one of the most dangerous jobs in the world.

Answer 3

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