I am writing a paper and I was wondering does this sound like a good thesis?

Question

Cofer shows not only the crazyness women but also shows how men can be harsh.

Answer 1

I don't understand what you're trying to say. Please clarify.

Answer 2

Women is going crazy that a man doesn't care for her so it is driving her crazy.
Men do harsh things like abusing their wife.

Answer 3

What did you read by Cofer? Are you supposed to be writing about that story?

Answer 4

I read A partial rememberance of a puerto rican childhood.
I'm suppose to be writing a essay but I need a thesis to do an outline.

Answer 5

Cofer shows how a woman can go crazy when her man ignores or abuses her.