Question

Could you please check these few things? Thank you, Writeacher.

Here is the password connected to the students' class email address.
If you want you can check the names of the students who have sent email so far.
Could you please ask them all to send a short message so that the email partnership can start? I really hope they can start communicating with each other this Friday.
2) My modem is connected to the computer by a wire. The line is fading in and out. We have had a lot of drop-outs.
3) He has three advantages over (on is wrong?) Friday: a linguistic advantage, a technical advantage and a cultural one. As to the first, Robinson teaches Friday enough English so that he can understand his language.

Answer 1

Here is the password for the students' class email address.

If you want you can check the names of the students who have sent email so far.
<b>This is not a complete sentence.</b>

Could you please ask them all to send a short message so that the email partnership can start? I really hope they can start communicating with each other this Friday.
<b>All OK.</b>

2) My modem is hard-wired to the computer, but the signal is fading in and out. We have had a lot of time lately with no Internet access.

3) He has three advantages over Friday: a linguistic advantage, a technical advantage, and a cultural one. As to the first, Robinson teaches Friday enough English so that he can understand his language.
<b>1. Yes, "on" would not be correct; use "over."
2. Clarify who/what the antecedent is (antecedents are?) for "he" and "his." Who is "he"? Whose is "his"?</b>