Question

story be more powerful in this first person narration? i write yes because we know what she feel and think. i not get second part to this which be there be other ways of describing what narrator think possible and/or more interesting? in anyways?

Answer 1

I agree with your answer. Using the first person narrator is the best way of showing what she is thinking.

Answer 2

thank you :) i not think there be any other interesting way to describe her feelings, that be the second part which i not get.

Answer 3

I agree. This is the most interesting way to describing her feelings.