Question

By studying in the USA, I believe that I am not only getting an internationally recognized education, but also a thrifty one. My decision to study here will help me become independent. In addition, the money I save by studying here will eventually help me realize my life's dream: to open a free dental clinic with oral hygiene classes in the rural areas of Pakistan and other countries. My parents always told me to brush my teeth morning and night, but it was not until high school that I actually realized why I did that. So imagine my parents learned from their school and encouraged me, but if a villager living in a shanty town does not know the importance of oral hygiene, how will his children learn? Who is there to teach them?. Becoming aware of oral diseases and their cause is the most important thing that the unfortunate community requires the most and suffers the greatest. My aim is to educate these ill-fated people to help them. . Oral/Dental hygiene, and in fact any kind of care is one's duty; however, if they are unaware, it is the educated people’s responsibility to guide them before their ignorance causes them harm. Protecting oral hygiene can save one from costly diseases.With the dream of my clinic I want to make change in peoples lives and their oral cavities. Attending SMDEP will bring me closer to my selfless goal.

Answer 1

So imagine<b><~~that verb has no subject </b> my parents learned from their school and encouraged me, but<b><~~start a new sentence here</b> if a villager living in a shanty town does not know the importance of oral hygiene, how will his children learn? Who is there to teach them?.<b><~~?? </b> Becoming aware of oral diseases and their cause<b><~~needs to be plural </b> is the most important thing that the unfortunate community requires the most and suffers the greatest. My aim is to educate these ill-fated people to help them. . <b><~~?? </b>Oral<b><~~only one word is needed </b> hygiene, and in fact any kind of care<b><~~add comma </b> is one's duty; however, if they<b><~~who are "they"? </b> are unaware, it is the educated people’s responsibility to guide them before their ignorance causes them harm. Protecting oral hygiene can save one from costly diseases.With<b><~~space after period </b> the dream of my clinic<b><~~You want only the dream? You don't want the real thing?? </b> I want to make change in peoples<b><~~?? </b> lives and their oral cavities<b><~~you want to help only their cavities? or their oral hygiene??</b>. Attending SMDEP will bring me closer to my selfless<b><~~delete that word</b> goal.