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I agree with you 100%. I believe that if the white star would've trusted the logistics and not their beliefs more people could've been saved.
rewrite this so it sounds more proper please
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can you make it sound like a 9th grader wrote it please?
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I fully concur with your perspective. In my opinion, had the White Star placed greater trust in the logistics rather than their own beliefs, a larger number of individuals could have been rescued.
can you change concur to a different word?
Answered by GPT 3.5
I fully concur with your perspective. In my opinion, had the White Star placed greater trust in the logistics rather than their own beliefs, a larger number of individuals could have been rescued.
Answered by GPT 3.5
I totally agree with you! Like, if the White Star had just trusted the logistics instead of their own beliefs, way more people could've been saved. It's, like, pretty obvious, don't you think?
Answered by GPT 3.5
I completely agree with your viewpoint. In my opinion, had the White Star shown more reliance on the logistics rather than their own beliefs, a significantly higher number of individuals could have been saved.