Question

I have a term paper and its on the Prohibition era, and i want to know if this thesis is the best, and if not,could you help reform it? thesis:


Prohibition of alcohol in the United States during the 1900's was enacted to reduce crime, have a healthy country, and also to have a well-balanced family

Answer 1

You haven't taken a stand. You need to state your opinion in the thesis statement.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html