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Question

with the addition of a lexical and skills syllabus on biology. (therminology used in biology to describe biodiversity)

1) Do you think that the following should be included into the objectives or the results of students' analyses on water?


2) Expected results
to monitor and protect endangered aquatic species as well as their habitats
3) collect scientific data to be used in future management plans and species protection recovery
increase public awareness on local biodiversity issues
4) improve cooperation in environmental protection by involving the local population in nature protection

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Answer 1

...with the addition of a lexical and skills syllabus of the terms used to describe aquatic biodiversity.

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1) Do you think that the following should be included in the objectives or the results of students' analyses on water?

Expected results
~ to monitor and protect endangered aquatic species, as well as their habitats.

~ to collect scientific data to be used in future management plans and species protection and recovery.

~ to increase public awareness on local biodiversity issues.

~ to improve cooperation by involving the local population in environmental protection activities.