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5) Finally, if a person doesn’t feel recognized and rewarded at work, he can reward himself with a day spent at a spa, for example.
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Other minor adjustments can be made to improve people's situation at work.
2) First, a person should communicate his point of view with clarity.
3)Second, he should do his best to maintain a balanced lifestyle by spending enough time on friends, family and exercise.
4) In other words, he should make sure his life doesn’t focus only on work.
5) Finally, if a person doesn’t feel recognized and rewarded at work, he can reward himself by, for example, pampering himself(I need a synonym) with a day spent at a spa.
English - Writeacher, Monday, December
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