Here are other mistakes I checked.I'd like you to have a look at them. Thanks.
1) Elizabeth I led a powerful emperor with a strong ship army.
Elizabeth made England a powerful seafaring and commercial country.
"Does the word ship army exist???"
2) She was helped by sea storms. Correction: the English ships defeated the Spanish ones also thanks to the stormy winds of the Scottish and Irish Seas.
3) The witches were supposed to have a witch's mark (not "witches' mark) or a devil's mark on their skin. These were normal tattoos on the skin. Correction: these were any ordinary markings on the skin.
4) Elizabeth's Parliament was composed by twenty nobles. Wrong: She ruled through her Privy Council composed of twenty nobles.
5) They prophesy that Macbeth will be first "the" Thane of Cowdor (or Thane of Cowdor) and then king of Scotland.
6) The inner stage was protected by a curtain. Better: It was hidden/concealed by a curtain.
7) Boy actors took women's place.??
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4) composed of (not by)
4) prophesy is a noun. prophicize is the verb so either "They prophicize" or "The prophesy..."
7) women's places
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