Asked by Henry2
Was my correction OK?
You can't say the Juliet's tomb scene
(but scenes such as Juliet's tomb)
I left out a sentence.
1)Women were not allowed to play so men had to play their roles. (Is this sentence OK?)
Better: Female roles were replaced by boy-actors.
2)James I wrote in the "Demonology" what he thought witches were able to do: up to him they were hags who used to make potions and castspells; they had familiars, they could fly and change the weather and aslo call up spirits and foretell the future.
3) Correction: in his book "Demonology" (without definite article) James I wrote that witches were old hags who used to make potions and cast spells; they had familiars,animal-shaped spirits who helped them with their magic. Furthermore, they could fly, change the weather, and foretell (predict) the future.
You can't say the Juliet's tomb scene
(but scenes such as Juliet's tomb)
I left out a sentence.
1)Women were not allowed to play so men had to play their roles. (Is this sentence OK?)
Better: Female roles were replaced by boy-actors.
2)James I wrote in the "Demonology" what he thought witches were able to do: up to him they were hags who used to make potions and castspells; they had familiars, they could fly and change the weather and aslo call up spirits and foretell the future.
3) Correction: in his book "Demonology" (without definite article) James I wrote that witches were old hags who used to make potions and cast spells; they had familiars,animal-shaped spirits who helped them with their magic. Furthermore, they could fly, change the weather, and foretell (predict) the future.
Answers
Answered by
SraJMcGin
1) It's OK but you might put a comma before "so"
2) "up to him" might be "as far as he was concerned"
Sra
2) "up to him" might be "as far as he was concerned"
Sra
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