(6) At first glance Bug Bowl events may seem rather ordinary, but a closer look reveals some surprises. (7) The races aren't relay or sack races; they are cockroach races. (8) Held at Pudue's Roach Hill Downs, these races are quite popular with visitors, who are invited to select their favorite roach and cheer for it to win. (9) Spectators stand and observe these cockroaches run across the ground.
2. Clayton would like to add better diction and description. Which of the following sentence would best replace sentence 9 to accomplish this task?
A. Many visitors who attend the festival watch as the cockroaches race across the ground
B. Thousands of spectators stand and observe as the big brown insects scurry across the ground.
C. The race includes many insects racing across the groups and observed by spectators.
D. Scurrying across the ground, thousands of spectators observe the brown insects race.
I chose A.
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I agree.
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