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can you please tell me my snetences make sense. this is about the great gatsby.
Gatsby tries to reunite with Daisy, expecting their relationship to sustain with the same compassion, affection, and love as before. However, he realizes that Daisy is now married, and she has a daughter. This suggests that the daughter existence itself opposes Gatsby idea of re-creating the past.
when i read this it sounds funnny,how can i make it better. THANKS ALOT
Gatsby tries to reunite with Daisy, expecting their relationship to sustain with the same compassion, affection, and love as before. However, he realizes that Daisy is now married, and she has a daughter. This suggests that the daughter existence itself opposes Gatsby idea of re-creating the past.
when i read this it sounds funnny,how can i make it better. THANKS ALOT
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Gatsby tries to reunite with Daisy, expecting their relationship to <b>continue</b> with the same compassion, affection, and love as before. However, he realizes that Daisy is now married, and she has a daughter. This suggests that the <b>daughter's</b> existence itself <b>hinders Gatsby's</b> idea <b>to re-create</b> the past.
<b>Pay attention to possessive nouns and the need to have correct spelling and punctuation. Twice in these three sentences, this error had to be corrected: <u>daughter's</u> and <u>Gatsby's</u>.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/possessives.htm</b>
<b>Pay attention to possessive nouns and the need to have correct spelling and punctuation. Twice in these three sentences, this error had to be corrected: <u>daughter's</u> and <u>Gatsby's</u>.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/possessives.htm</b>
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