1. To represent the unspoken activity of the mind, twentieth-century writers adopted the interior monologue. (Better: ..writers adopted... to represent..) Either way works.
2. The wind is given human characteristics.
3. Women were considered inferior to men and took care of the management of the house.
4. The sight of the flowers (Can you say "the sight of them") amazes the poet. Either phrasing works.
5.It was important for Victorians to attend the church, do charitable activity, and have a comfortable house.
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Thank you very much. Where can I find exercises on the use of idioms, collocations and phrasal verbs?
Here are some other corrections I'd like you to check.
1. To represent the unspoken activity of the mind twenty-century writers adopted the interior monologue. (Better: ..writers adopted... to represent..)
2. The wind is described with human characteristics (?)
3. Women came after men (were inferior to men) and did home affairs (were in charge of the management of the house)
4. The sight of the flowers (Can you say "the sight of them") amazes the poet.
5.It was important for Victorians to attend the church, do charitable activity and have a comfortable house.
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