Asked by Amor
Please check grammar correctint comma splice sentences and need to use more the 1 method.
Original sentence: Unfortunately Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote,she died in 1906.
My corrected sentence:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
Thank you in advance for your assists.
Original sentence: Unfortunately Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote,she died in 1906.
My corrected sentence:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
Thank you in advance for your assists.
Answers
Answered by
Writeacher
Your correction is good. What other method are you going to use?
Answered by
Amor
The following two:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote. She died in 1906.
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote. She died in 1906.
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.
Answered by
Writeacher
I'd add a comma after "Amendment" in each sentence.
Other than that, they're just fine! Nice!
Other than that, they're just fine! Nice!
Answered by
Amor
Thank you for your help
Answered by
Writeacher
You're very welcome.