Question

Were all my corections OK (except complimentary?).
I’d like you to check the following clothes’ descriptions as well as a few journey’s arrangements (in particular the use of prepositions of location or of time with “holiday”, “hotel”, and “square”). Thank you very much.

1)The old man is wearing a black suit with a white shirt and a white-and-blue striped tie.
2)The girl in the picture is wearing a beige leather jacket with a short-sleeved yellow blouse underneath, a pair of skinny, washed-out jeans and a pair of white-and-red-polka-dot ankle socks.
3) She is also wearing a pair of black high-heeled shoes.
4)A black boy is wearing a grey-and-black checked bandana, a black hoodie and blue tracksuit bottoms. He has sports lace-up shoes on.
5)We are free to have lunch where we want. We are going to have breakfast and dinner at the hotel (also “in the hotel?).
6) I’m accommodated at the (not in?) Bristol hotel. I’m going to do the shopping (to go shopping) at Harrot’s. I’m going to have a packed lunch (a lunch box).

Answer 1

yes on the others

#6 is that Harrods? accommodated at or in the Bristol hotel.

Sra

Answer 2

1) OK

2)The girl in the picture is wearing a beige leather jacket with a short-sleeved yellow blouse underneath, a pair of skinny, washed-out jeans, and a pair of white-and-red-polka-dot ankle socks.

3) OK

4)A black boy is wearing a grey-and-black checked bandana, a black hoodie, and blue tracksuit pants. He has lace-up athletic shoes on.

5)We are free to have lunch where we want. We are going to have breakfast and dinner at the hotel. IN THE HOTEL - WORKS FINE, TOO.

6) I’m staying at the Bristol hotel. I’m going shopping at Harrod’s. I’m going to have a box lunch prepared.