Question

Heya, i am supposed to come up with a thesis for my scarlet letter essay that i am doing for my higher level english class, and i want to do it one the hypocrisy and how the church and the religious authority and beliefs characterize it throughout the novel. my teacher wants to also include why hawthorne was doing this, and etc. i am not sure how to word my thesis.
thing is, i need this quickly. im not sure this question will be answered soon. but im hoping. please help

Answer 1

Only you can write your thesis statement because only you know what you are trying to prove by the end of your paper. Keep in mind that most thesis statements end up being revised during your researching, reading, planning, and writing process.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into a real thesis statement.

Just remember: Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)

Answer 2

PS - Once you get a draft of your thesis statement written, feel free to post it if you'd like feedback from one of us.