Can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

1) My mum is an employee. She works for a confectionary industry.
2) I like spending time on the net (better: I like surfing the net). I like playing on my PlayStation.
I also like going out with my friends on Saturday evening.
3) I play football in a football club called Juventus. I'm interested in all kinds of sport.
4) I lived in London until the age of two (better: until I was two years old; up to the age of two?)
5) My dad grows the vine (Or is a vine grower) whereas my mum runs a bed and breakfast.
6) My hobbies are riding my bike and watching comic films on TV.
7) I'm passionate about photography (correction: I'm fond of photography)
I'm a sport fan. I'm a sporty person. I'm a sprot enthusiast.
8)I've got two younger sisters; Jane of sixteen (better:Jane is sixteen )and Alexia of fifteen.
9) I get on with my sister (correction: I get on well with my sister)
10)My favourite movies (?) are horror films.

1 answer

7. It's not necessary to correct what you have first. Both are acceptable.

8. is is preferable

Sra
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