I really need you to check these sentences on the Industrial Revolution. Thank you very much.

1)The second half of George III’s reign saw England engaged in the long struggle against Napoleon to save her own independence and the freedom of the various states of Europe.
2) The European states tried at first to oppose the French egemony by joining together against the overpowering strength of the French armies but their efforts were unsuccessful.
3) England continued the war, keeping the mastery of the sea. In 1805 the powerful British Navy obtained a great victory at Trafalgar. The final victory came in 1815 at Waterloo.
4) By the end of the Georgian age, Britain had become a great power. Continuing supremacy at sea laid the foundations of the British Empire.
5)The Industrial Revolution started at the beginning of the 19th century and saw Britain change from an agricultural to an industrialized society. It became the most manufacturing country of the world.
6)Factories, cotton mills, potteries and ironworks spang up all over Britain. By 1800 the British textile industry, making cotton and woollen cloth, employed thousands of peple.
7)London became a centre of banking, and a mercantile and professional class grew up.

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2. I believe you mean 'hegemony'

5. The a in Age is usually capitalized as well, being part of the "title"

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