Question

The gym closes in 30 minutes, so I'll have to hurry through my workout.
Firefighters work long hours, they usually enjoy their work.
The movie starts at 8:00 PM we should leave home by 7:30 PM.
I love playing video games. I can spend hours playing them

Answer 1

Here are corrections and improvements for each of the sentences:

1. **Original:** The gym closes in 30 minutes, so I'll have to hurry through my workout.
**Improved:** The gym closes in 30 minutes, so I’ll need to hurry through my workout.

2. **Original:** Firefighters work long hours, they usually enjoy their work.
**Improved:** Firefighters work long hours, but they usually enjoy their work.

3. **Original:** The movie starts at 8:00 PM we should leave home by 7:30 PM.
**Improved:** The movie starts at 8:00 PM, so we should leave home by 7:30 PM.

4. **Original:** I love playing video games. I can spend hours playing them.
**Improved:** I love playing video games and can spend hours playing them.

These adjustments improve clarity and grammatical correctness. Would you like to modify any specific sentences further?