How can I fix this sentence?

Julie should show her concerns toward the patient by asking, “How do you feel now?” or “If you have anything to share with me, I am happy to stay here with you and listen to your problems?”

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Break it into two sentences.

Julie should show her concerns toward the patient by asking, “How do you feel now?”

She could also say, “If you have anything to share with me, I am happy to stay here with you and listen to your problems.”
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