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Is this thesis statement too long for a four page essay? Also, are there any major grammatical errors?
Although a cursory glance at Odysseus on his long journey home may lead to a conclusion that he is motivated by an overwhelming desire to see his wife and family again, a more thorough look at his motives seems to disprove this theory, and suggest rather that it is a matter of pride, and wanting glory and honor.
Although a cursory glance at Odysseus on his long journey home may lead to a conclusion that he is motivated by an overwhelming desire to see his wife and family again, a more thorough look at his motives seems to disprove this theory, and suggest rather that it is a matter of pride, and wanting glory and honor.
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Answered by
Writeacher
Oh, my, yes, it's too long!
How can you condense it?
How can you condense it?
Answered by
Writeacher
Use the ideas here to help yourself:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
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