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In context, which is the best revision to sentence 15 (reproduced below)?
They need fresh food water and attention and entertainment.
AInsert "and" before "water".BReplace "They need" with "I want".CDelete all but the last "and" and add commas.DSwitch "fresh food water" and "and entertainment".
They need fresh food water and attention and entertainment.
AInsert "and" before "water".BReplace "They need" with "I want".CDelete all but the last "and" and add commas.DSwitch "fresh food water" and "and entertainment".
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The best revision to sentence 15 is:
A. Insert "and" before "water".
This revision corrects the list by clearly separating the items, making it easier to read: "They need fresh food, and water, and attention and entertainment." Additionally, to further improve clarity, a better option would be to add commas before the "and": "They need fresh food, water, attention, and entertainment." However, since that option is not listed, option A is the best choice among the provided options.
A. Insert "and" before "water".
This revision corrects the list by clearly separating the items, making it easier to read: "They need fresh food, and water, and attention and entertainment." Additionally, to further improve clarity, a better option would be to add commas before the "and": "They need fresh food, water, attention, and entertainment." However, since that option is not listed, option A is the best choice among the provided options.
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