Question
You are revising a narrative essay to use more figurative language. Which would be the best sentence to use?
Responses
A The clouds hung oppressively.The clouds hung oppressively.
B The clouds were low and ominous.The clouds were low and ominous.
C The clouds floated by quickly in the strong breeze.The clouds floated by quickly in the strong breeze.
D The clouds were fluffy and ripe, like cotton candy.The clouds were fluffy and ripe, like cotton candy.
Responses
A The clouds hung oppressively.The clouds hung oppressively.
B The clouds were low and ominous.The clouds were low and ominous.
C The clouds floated by quickly in the strong breeze.The clouds floated by quickly in the strong breeze.
D The clouds were fluffy and ripe, like cotton candy.The clouds were fluffy and ripe, like cotton candy.
Answers
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D. The clouds were fluffy and ripe, like cotton candy.
This sentence uses a simile to create a vivid image and engage the reader's imagination, making it the best option for incorporating figurative language into your narrative essay.
This sentence uses a simile to create a vivid image and engage the reader's imagination, making it the best option for incorporating figurative language into your narrative essay.