Question
You are revising a narrative paragraph about going on a hike with your cousin, JoJo. You have written the following sentences:
I was hiking along Rooster Trail. I was with my cousin, JoJo. Suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
Which revision correctly combines the sentences?
I was hiking along Rooster Trail. I was with my cousin, JoJo, suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
I was hiking along Rooster Trail with my cousin, JoJo, suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
I was hiking along Rooster Trail with my cousin, JoJo. Suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
I was hiking along Rooster Trail. I was with my cousin, JoJo. Suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
Which revision correctly combines the sentences?
I was hiking along Rooster Trail. I was with my cousin, JoJo, suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
I was hiking along Rooster Trail with my cousin, JoJo, suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
I was hiking along Rooster Trail with my cousin, JoJo. Suddenly, the weather turned stormy.
Answers
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The correct revision that properly combines the sentences is:
"I was hiking along Rooster Trail with my cousin, JoJo. Suddenly, the weather turned stormy."
This option maintains clarity and proper punctuation.
"I was hiking along Rooster Trail with my cousin, JoJo. Suddenly, the weather turned stormy."
This option maintains clarity and proper punctuation.