Question

I'm trying to start an essay paragraph with the topic " Contributing to the community" and I was wondering if this is a good starting sentence.If not, please give me some ideas or suggestions for one.Thanks

-Everyone in life had made significant contributions to the community to help other in this endless changing world.( I just added the "to help other in this endless changing world" because the sentences was too short.)

Answer 1

But has everyone made significant contributions to the community?

What about people who do nothing to help others?

Answer 2

Possible for you to suggest me some ideas? I ran out of ideas on how to start it for this topic. I think all day in school and could only come up with sentences that start with "Everyone".Thanks again =D

Answer 3

Contributing to the community not only helps others, it also benefits the contributor.

Answer 4

Thank you very much for your helps throughout the day, Ms.Sue!

Answer 5

You're very welcome, Shadow.