Question
Read the beginning of Joseph’s personal narrative.
My aunt Sophia is a painter. She started painting when she was a young girl and went to an art school later in life. Now, she makes her living selling her paintings all over the world. When I was in elementary school, a classmate made fun of a drawing I made of a horse. It made me feel like I was a bad artist, so I told myself I would never draw again. I refused to do any artwork, no matter what anyone said. That changed when my family went to visit my Aunt Sophia when I was twelve years old.
Which element of a personal narrative would be best for Joseph to include next?
a strong example that shows how Joseph’s aunt changed his view of himself as an artist
an interesting detail about Aunt Sophia’s life when she was a student in art school
a closing explanation of the effect Joseph’s aunt had on his view of himself as an artist
some background information about Aunt Sophia and her relationship to one of Joseph’s parents
My aunt Sophia is a painter. She started painting when she was a young girl and went to an art school later in life. Now, she makes her living selling her paintings all over the world. When I was in elementary school, a classmate made fun of a drawing I made of a horse. It made me feel like I was a bad artist, so I told myself I would never draw again. I refused to do any artwork, no matter what anyone said. That changed when my family went to visit my Aunt Sophia when I was twelve years old.
Which element of a personal narrative would be best for Joseph to include next?
a strong example that shows how Joseph’s aunt changed his view of himself as an artist
an interesting detail about Aunt Sophia’s life when she was a student in art school
a closing explanation of the effect Joseph’s aunt had on his view of himself as an artist
some background information about Aunt Sophia and her relationship to one of Joseph’s parents
Answers
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The best element for Joseph to include next is:
**a strong example that shows how Joseph’s aunt changed his view of himself as an artist.**
This will help to illustrate the transformation and pivotal moment in his journey as an artist, making the personal narrative more engaging and meaningful.
**a strong example that shows how Joseph’s aunt changed his view of himself as an artist.**
This will help to illustrate the transformation and pivotal moment in his journey as an artist, making the personal narrative more engaging and meaningful.