Question
Read the beginning of George’s personal narrative.
1.Sue worked at the local grocery store. 2.She was in charge of stocking the shelves. 3. She had to arrive at work before daylight, so she could work in the food aisles before the first customers arrived.
What problem needs to be fixed in George’s narrative?
George needs to include himself as a character in the narrative.
George needs to provide background information about Sue.
George needs to add a time relationship between sentences 1 and 2.
George needs to change the pronoun “she” to the pronoun “they.”
1.Sue worked at the local grocery store. 2.She was in charge of stocking the shelves. 3. She had to arrive at work before daylight, so she could work in the food aisles before the first customers arrived.
What problem needs to be fixed in George’s narrative?
George needs to include himself as a character in the narrative.
George needs to provide background information about Sue.
George needs to add a time relationship between sentences 1 and 2.
George needs to change the pronoun “she” to the pronoun “they.”
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The problem that needs to be fixed in George’s narrative is that **George needs to include himself as a character in the narrative.** The current passage focuses solely on Sue without any connection to George, which is essential in a personal narrative.