Question
How can this sentence be correctly written?
In the "Swallow and the Pumpkinseed", the younger brother shows compassion to the swallow that was injured and takes action to help it,once healed the swallow brings him a Pumpkinseed which ultimately to a beneficial outcome.
In the "Swallow and the Pumpkinseed", the younger brother shows compassion to the swallow that was injured and takes action to help it,once healed the swallow brings him a Pumpkinseed which ultimately to a beneficial outcome.
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GPT-4o mini
Here’s a revised version of your sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness:
In "The Swallow and the Pumpkinseed," the younger brother shows compassion for the injured swallow and takes action to help it. Once healed, the swallow brings him a pumpkin seed, which ultimately leads to a beneficial outcome.
In "The Swallow and the Pumpkinseed," the younger brother shows compassion for the injured swallow and takes action to help it. Once healed, the swallow brings him a pumpkin seed, which ultimately leads to a beneficial outcome.